very emotional...
Mere tu Ankooh mai ansoo agayee...
Hameshaa kii tarhh superb likha haii
aglayy hissayy ka intazarr rahhay gaaa![]()
تیری انگلیاں میرے جسم میںیونÛÛŒ لمس بن Ú©Û’ Ú¯Ú‘ÛŒ رÛیں
ک٠کوزه گر میری مان لےمجھے چاک سے Ù†Û Ø§ØªØ§Ø±Ù†Ø§
bohat achi kahani likhi hai
bohat interesting lag rahi hai
keep writing next part ka intezar rahay ga![]()
wah hamesha ki trah xabardast
heart touching
nxt part ka intezaar rehe ga
bhot acha likha ha
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very very beautyfully written
next part bhii umeed hai jld aye ga
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some people are worth
melting for....!!!
..(olaf)..
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very well written
lekin kuch jani pehchani hai story![]()
wah bht umdah![]()
Zindagi tu apnay he qadmun pe chalti hay Faraz
Auron k Sahary tu Janazy utha kartay hain